Our love so new
it has no footprints.
We stand in the
moment of its birth
not caring how
we got here.
Our souls intoxicated
with the dream
we will have
a tomorrow.
What blooms with fragrant hope, but the blessed petal of love?
©Susie Clevenger 2011
Photograph: Susie Clevenger
10 comments:
Oh, I can feel the hope, anticipation and possibilty from those words :)
Thank you Jen
Susie, you had me with that darling first line:)
That´s sweet! :-)
Those first lines are just gorgeous!
Your poem beautifully conveys the preoccupation of the mind with the one you love and the state of "intoxication" that you experience. Well penned.
Love so new, hope the souls entwine & walk many a miles together till eternity to leave footprints, that shall be remembered forever :)
This is so so very beautiful...Love!!!
Susie, this is beautiful! I wish you many wonderful tomorrows.
Thank you so much Janet!!
@Evalinn, thank you @Thanks Mama Zen @Thanks Enigmatic, Love is something I write on often. @Thank you Beyond @Thank you Mary
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