Love is riding a knife…
It is the edge of glory
when it is brand new….
It can cut your heart out
when it is through.
I’m no magician
I can’t tell you
if this will end.
I’m taking a chance
we will survive this romance.
Give me a yes or give me a no.
Love me or let me go.
Love is riding a knife…
It is the edge of glory
when it is brand new…
It can cut your heart out
when it is through.
©Susie Clevenger 2012
11 comments:
So true. Love the metaphor. "The first cut is the deepest," right?
Nicely done and with a gentle non-obtrusive rhyme. I like the repeating line and cyclical beginning/ending stanza very song like. Great job, Susie!! :)
How cool is this? Your words are so true to the "rock" ballad. I loved it.
Oh, love is riding a knife edge indeed.
Yes, you rocked it :)
love it! you should rhyme more :)
love is like riding a knife, indeed. indeed!!
This could be a hit song. Truly. Fantastic, Susie!!!!!!
Perfect rock ballad!
This is very cool :-)
Good work, Susie. "Riding a knife" — scary, but with oh, so much potential!
Definitely should be a rock ballad.
K
I definitely enjoyed this!
This was great....I loved it~
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